I decided to give Eugene Kane a little help

In his opinion piece in yesterday’s Milwaukee Journal Sentinel, cialis sales try columnist Eugene Kane wrote:

One of Milwaukee’s most daunting problems is the underutilization of black men with criminal records in the work force.

I think we can make that sentence even more accurate with a quick edit:

One of Milwaukee’s most daunting problems is the prevalence of black men with criminal records.

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