I decided to give Eugene Kane a little help
In his opinion piece in yesterday’s Milwaukee Journal Sentinel, cialis sales try columnist Eugene Kane wrote:
One of Milwaukee’s most daunting problems is the underutilization of black men with criminal records in the work force.
I think we can make that sentence even more accurate with a quick edit:
One of Milwaukee’s most daunting problems is the prevalence of black men with criminal records.
2 comments January 9th, 2009